Can you please tell me what you think?
Question:
A sigh..
A sniffle...
Lost now
In the sounds
Of the storm
That is venting
Its anger outside.
A name...
A scream...
A whisper...
Escape your lips.
And is remembered.
Forged by your emotion.
It is seared into my memory.
A word...
A sentence...
A long story...
Flows into my ears.
Triggering something deep
And I suddenly remember it all.
Feelings...
Emotions...
A young love...
Visits my mind once again.
And fills me with happiness.
Answers:
I thought it was wonderful. I can definitely see where you're coming from. Keep writing...
I think of passion, sorrow, love, remorse and joy. Its a pretty good poem.
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