Can you please tell me what you think of this?
Question:
A touch.
A kiss.
Is lost in the confusion of your world,
Is drowned by your emotions.
A hug.
A tear.
A smile.
Is forgotten by your dark mind.
You turn the other cheek to it
And act as if it didn’t exist.
You and I.
Our friendship.
Our relationship.
No longer exists
In your cold black eyes.
Forced out by your coldness
Where nothing dares to exist.
A shove.
A slap.
A punch.
All delivered by your hands.
By the hands that were supposed to touch me.
By the hands that were supposed to hold me.
By the hands that were supposed to comfort me.
A glance.
A touch.
A kiss.
Filled with nothing.
Just like your barren heart.
Answers:
I really like it... I can see where you are coming from because I believe I've been in the same situation as you. Keep writing!
Oh. Looks like it's over babe. And I was just getting to know you. Oh well ....
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