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It's a poem I wrote:

You Can't Help Me-

The pain I feel inside,
It hurts so bad,
I cut, then hide.
You can't help me.

The tingle that I feel,
The burning of my skin,
It makes me seem so real.
No, you can't help me.

The scratches that I make,
A nightmare, then I wake,
Drowning in my blood,
You can't help me.

the blood - it drips away,
I no-longer feel so numb,
The price that I must pay,
NO, you can't help me.

Is it any good? It's about me cutting and why I can't tell anybody about it.

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It is a good poem. Nice structure as well as wording. Good Job.

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it is a good poem. But I'd really like it if you did go and get some help. See a therapist, psychiatrist, counselor, someone.

You need help! Why are you cutting yourself? Dont ruin your body. You are a beautiful person and shouldnt do that to yourself.

very very nice poem.itz deep.but if u need help u should get some.foreal.good luck girl.

Get some help. You are worth it.

Good descriptions of how you feel. True emotions.
Good job!

its kind of morbid.
how about something more cheerful?

This is beautiful, but you are in real pain.Please call help

The poem reflects what u exactly feel inside, u need help, consult someone who knows u well maybe ur close friends who can help you. You have to tell someone how you really feel, whatever the reasons maybe for you to write such a poem i don't know but i am sure you have a problem and it need attention. You have to let everything out, i bet you, you will feel better. Surely there is someone out there who can help you.

Hey, It's from the heart and that makes it WONDERFUL. I think you might want to get some help, from someone who has gone through this stuff. Its hard to look at someone and tell them, especially friends or family. Sometimes its easier to talk to a stranger. Most counselors are required to report to your parents or authorities if they believe you are in danger of hurting yourself. But please find some kind of outlet. Don't go through what I went through. If it will help shoot me a email I'll try to help or find anonymous help for you

Good Luck and Stay Strong

like this very much and brings memories back to me like you I was in a poetic frame of mind.

This poem is very revealing you need to talk with someone you trust maybe a Close friend but maybe more like a help counselor, about what you are indicating in your poem.

I have been there myself, I was fortunately strong enough to have people around me.

I like it. It's a good poem.

It's good, but i'm more into the romantic kind of poems.

Its agood piece but you may not have written it for fun unless it is copied from someone else. When I used to write poems, all text came from deep inside.
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ouch! but, its nice.

Good poem! but if you choose to end your life you can never start solving your problem. don't be pulled back by what already happened. but instead look ahead something is pushing you forward, the pain you had and something helped you to go forward.the future where your goal in life lies ahead. reach it. and look back once and say to yourself "I'm blessed with a will to live and once more feel the happiness I deserve"

I think it is really good, you should make a poem book of you own, one that expresses your emotions, and then someday if you ever feel like it submit it to a book publishing company.Oh, and I have some advice as far as your other question, so e-mail me if you'd like to hear it.

pretty good just try not to cut

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